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这是中考英语作文辅导ppt,包括了英语写作的重要性及初中生写作现状,中考英语高分作文的特点,对考生的要求,评分标准,十句作文法等内容,欢迎点击下载。
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English writing 一 、英语写作的重要性及初中生写作现状 (一)英语写作的重要性 1. 写作是中考乃至高考的必考题型,且所占比重较大,同时也是拉开考生距离的关键题型。 2. 随着我国对外经济、文化、教育等方面交往的日益频繁,英语写作也成为雅思、GRE、 TOFEL等诸多考试以及职场应聘的必考内容之一。 一 、英语写作的重要性及初中生写作现状 (二)初中生写作现状 1) 审题不清,抓不住要点,东拉西扯; 2) 单词拼写错误; frist ,belive, ture, buzy, quite & quiet … 3) 动词缺失; Eg: I happy I can go to Peking. 4)前后不一致(数、人称、时态、主谓不一致等) Eg: All people have their own dream. He said he wants to have a good rest. 5)中式英语 Eg: I very like sports. 6) 综合性错误。 包括单词大小写、标点符号以及形容词副词的混淆、连词的缺失误用、 句子结构不完整等。 二、中考英语高分作文的特点 1、书写工整,书面整洁,很少有涂改痕迹。 2、分段合理。全文分段一般不止一个自然段,让阅卷老师很容易就能找到作文所要求写的要点和重要句子。 3、要点齐全,不缺要点。 4、首尾呼应,自然成一体。 5、开头言简意赅,不啰嗦,不偏题,迅速引入主题。 6、段与段之间,自然过渡。有合适的连接词。 7、句与句之间,有恰当的连接词,使之自然成一体。 8、使用了大量的高级词汇和句型。阅卷老师一看就知道这个同学的功底非不一般,自然就给打高分了。 9、全文中同一个意思,基本没有重复使用某一个词、短语或者句型等,说明这个同学的词汇量不同寻常。老师自然就对该作文有好感了。 10、能够恰当使用谚语、格言等给文章添彩。 三、对考生的要求 1、内容要完整。 2、语句流畅。 3、没有语法错误。 4、书写规范。 能达到上述要求的作文,都会得到相应的高分。 四、评分标准 第五档(17—20分):表达清楚,行文连贯,语言基本无误。 第四档(13—16分):表达基本清楚,行文基本连贯,语言有少量错误。 第三档(9—12分):语言虽有较多错误,尚能达意。 第二档(5—8分):能写明基本要点;语言错误多,影响意思表达。 第一档(0—4分):白卷或文不对题,或错误百出,不知所云。 (一)扣分点 1.内容方面:要点缺失,可酌情扣分。若没有写一件具体的事情,是要扣3分以上的;若写的事情太过于虚幻,没有实际内容,也会扣1-2分。 2.字数:少于80字的作文要酌情扣分。 中考英语作文要求80字以上,标点符号不算,少了就要扣分。但是80字的作文能不能得高分?从我们拿到的实例作文来看,16分以上的作文,没有少于85字的,甚至少于80字的也少之又少。当然,也极少有超过95字的,因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个,在格子下面大约还有2行的空间,可以加20字左右,再多阅卷人就很难看清了,也会影响卷面的美观。所以,如果想让作文得到高分,最好是让字数在80-90字之间。 3. 语法和拼写错误:每个扣0.5,重复错误不计; 4. 标点错误:每4个扣0.5. (二)加分点 根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。 只要文章中有1个亮点,基本就可以争取到1分。而这1分的亮点,是可以提前准备的。例如,有一些“万金油”式的复杂句型,例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等,只要同学们多操练几次,几乎是一定能用到作文当中,从而为自己争取到这1分。 其次就是卷面分。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项,但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。 据阅卷老师的经验,在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的,而是在第一遍读完全文之后,心里已经形成了一个“印象分”,然后再细读第二、三遍,把印象分分配到各个打分部分。因此,这个“印象分”就非常重要,而同学们的书法,也正是在这个环节,影响到了自己的分数。所以如果书法不好,一定要注意。所谓的书法并不需要写的很漂亮,符合3个简单的标准即可:没有斜体、没有连笔、涂改较少。 1. 词汇的巧妙记忆。 (children; believe…) 2. 加强中考课标词汇、短语的听默写。 3. 鼓励学生(尤其是优等生)坚持课外阅读,并用“积累”本收集高频词汇、短语、佳句,加强记忆。 4. 使用“高端”的词汇。 认真审题,找出文章要表达的中心。 一般作文包括一定数量的内容点,漏写某一点则要被扣掉2~3分,因此审题要细心观察,特别是在做看图作文题时,要注意某些夸张“画点”,它(们)常是暗示应当写出的内容点。画面内容较多时,不要事无巨细,全面开花,应当仅仅围绕主题。恰当取舍,做到详略得当。 加 加首尾,使结构完整。 可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构,开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁,漂亮。 连 恰当运用关联词句,使得文章层次清晰,各个部分衔接自然。 1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both…and, not only…but also, neither…nor; 2.表示选择: or, either…or; 3.表示转折: but, however, although, though, after all, 4.表示因果: because, so, therefore 5.表示条件: if , unless 6.表示对比: instead, not…but, on the one hand…on the other hand; 7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words; 8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end; 9.表示强调: also, besides, what’s more, actually, in fact, 10.表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word, generally speaking, 美 选好词句,美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。 英语写作中用好“四心” 1.精心审题,沉着写稿 2.耐心修改,提炼句子 3.细心检查, 消灭错误 4.虚心抄写,一丝不苟。 英语写作中流行的十句作文法是由专家总结一种高分作文方法,考生在经过短期训练之后便可较大程度地提高作文成绩。需要指出的是:所谓十句作文并非一定是10句,很多考生的高分作文的句子数量都在8至10句之间(以句子长短和结构不同而变化)。如按每个句子平均8~12个单词计算,用7~10个句子便能完成一篇要求在80词左右的作文。其基本模式为: 金华市2010年中考英语作文题目 暑假时每个中学生期盼的一段时光,请你围绕如何过一个轻松、愉快、有意义的暑假,写一篇80字左右的英语短文。 注意: 1、文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名。 2、下列词汇可供参考:summer holiday, travel, do sports, do some reading, help…with, housework, take part in… 3、题目自拟。 My Dream Summer Holiday The summer holiday is coming. After so much work at school, how I want to relax myself! My first choice is to watch TV and do more sports. Then I will help myparentswith some housework. After all, they have done so much for me. Besides, visiting the World Expo is my biggest wish. At the same time, I will continue to study,especiallyto improve my English. I also want to take part in some interesting activities, which can enrich my experience. That is my dream summer holiday. I’m sure my holiday will be relaxing, happy and meaningful! 2011年看图表达 根据下面的图画,请你用英语写一篇短文。包括6—9个句子。短文要求达意、正确、连贯。 One possible version New Year's Day is coming. Some students are going to hold a party on New Year's Eve. Now they are busy getting ready for it. A boy is carrying some food and a box of drinks into the classroom while others are working hard to make the classroom nice and clean for the party. Look, a girl is making some paper flowers and a boy is writing "Happy New Year" and drawing some pictures on the blackboard. Over there two students are cleaning the windows and desks. I think they will have a wonderful party and enjoy themselves a lot. 2012年金华考题 本周,你们班来了位外籍教师Margate假如你是李明,请用英语给Margate写一封信,描述你们班英语学习的现状并表达你的愿望。 One possible version Dear Margaret, I am Li Mine, a student in the class. I am writing to tell you about our English learning. At present, we have a lot of written work to do. Also, we speak too much Chinese m class, which doesn‘t help a lot. And we are learning too much grammar. It’s just difficult and boring. Besides, we don,t like copying texts, either. , , So I hope in your class, we can have more activities like discussion or role playing. Don t you think they will help to practice speaking English? And we'll be happy if we can learn some English songs or watch English movies. Looking forward to a big change in our class. ( 94 words) Yours.Li Ming 金华市2013年中考英语书面表达 你校组织一次与澳大利亚交流生的交流活动,主题为 “My Dream School ”.请根据表中的提示词,用英语写一篇发言稿,描述你理想中的高中学校。 要求::(1 )词数:80~100。 (2 )文中不得出现真实姓名或校名 。 (3 )开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。 金华市2013年中考英语书面表达 My Dream School Ladies and gentlemen, I'd like to share with you my dream school. The moment you enter this school, you will see a large and beautiful campus with trees and flowers here and there. In this school, we are living like a big family. Teachers here are kind as parents and classmates get along well with each other like brothers and sisters. When in class we are free to choose what we are interested in and are given a lot of time to practice. After class, instead of doing much homework, we can join different kinds of clubs and do whatever sports we like. What do you think of my dream high school? That’s all. Thanks for listening. 2014书面表达(本题有2小题;第81题5分,第82题15分,共20分) 81.来自美国的Ronnie Smith是你校新来的英语教师,下面是他本周末的出行意向表。 Hello,I’m Ronnie.I’ve stayed here for nearly a month. I want to learn about __(1)__. So I’d like to have a trip to __(2)__,but I don’t know where to go.Can you give me some advice? What’s more,it’s OK for me to go there by bus, __(3)__ or on foot. Will you be free __(4)__? Would you like to be my guide and share it with me? Please __(5)__. 81. (1)Chinese culture (2) somewhere special/ a special place/ someplace special/… (3) by bike (4) this weekend/ this Saturday/ this Sunday… (5) email me/send me an email/ send an email to me/ call me/send me a letter/give me a reply One possible version Dear Ronnie, I'm very glad to be your guide. The place I advise you to visit is the Culture Village. I think it’s the best place to learn Chinese culture that you're interested in. We'd better go there by bus, because it's a little far from our school. The moment we get there, we can watch traditional shows which may he different from those in your country. They are so interesting that you’ll know a lot about the lifestyle in villages. Then we can enjoy local food, for example, jiaozi— a kind of dumplings. If you prefer, you can learn to make it in person. How about taking a camera with you so that we can take some photos? I' m sure we'll enjoy ourselves there. Yours, Li Ming 2015 你班新转入一位来自澳大利亚的同学,名叫Sophia,请根据表格提供的信息,写一篇短文,介绍及班级的情况,并对的到来表示欢迎。 One possible version May I have your attention,please? I'd like to introduce you a new classmate from Sydney,Australia,whose name is Sophia and she is 15. Sophia is an out-going and happy girl.She is good at swimming . Now,Sophia.I think you are lucky enough to be a member of this big family.Everyone is hard-working and ready to help whenever you are in trouble.We all get along well and groupwork in and out of class is what we are proud of. OK,you guys.Let’s give Sophia a warm welcome and hope she’ll enjoy her stay in this great big family. 2016年 假如你是No. 2 Middle School 的学生李华,下周,一批英国中学生将来你们学校进行为期两周的学习和交流。请根据下列表格中的要点,写一封自荐信,邀请其中一位学生来你家居住。 One possible version Dear friend, I am Li Hua, a boy student from No.2 Middle School, I’m writing to invite you to come and stay in my home during the next two weeks. I like to make friends. This is the main reason I write this letter. I’m also good at sports and know something about British culture. Do you think we have a lot to talk about? As for my family, you will like it the moment you come, My pareots are not only kind and friendly, but also helpful,Believe is or not, they can also speak English! Do you think I am your first choice now? Looking forward to meeting you. Yours, Li Hua
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